Probation: BalrogSlayer

Discussion in 'Probation' started by BalrogSlayer2, May 7, 2018.

  1. Hello there!,
    I Look forward to building with you!
     
    _Simbaa likes this.
  2. First House at /warp Keath
    Coords: -1207 39 4064
     
  3. Second house At /warp Ball
    Coords: -6191 48 18927
     
  4. Hello Balrog,
    as I promised here I am. Your very own probation leader, in the next month I will ask you to build atleast 5 houses in various different styles. I will make sure to walk you through the feedback I will be giving you preferably first hand, while reviewing the houses with you on the server. If for some reason this way will not be available Ill post the feedback right here in detail for you to find. I will also be leaving a brief recap of any mistakes/errors etc.. we found on your houses aswel for you to use as a reference in your future builds.

    Good Luck!
    -Simbaa
     
  5. Keath house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    - no farmland for cabbages
    -make sure the weathering (jungle/oak) looks fitting to the building
    - excess amount of storage blocks
    -limit the amount of metal pieces to only 1-2 per low class household
    - some small tweaks in furnishing placement etc..
    - otherwise a solid first build

    Ball house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    - tables with only 1 leg have arent the best at staying up :D
    -a candle can be a pretty big fire hazard
    -excess amount of storage blocks
    -limit the amount of metal pieces to only 1-2 per low class household
    -few interior tweaks, like replacing rope ladders with regular ones etc...
    -otherwise great job
     
  6. Third house at /warp Broom
    Coords: -4853 34 14647
     
  7. Broom house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    All good!
     
  8. Fourth House At /warp sthvillage
    Coords: -6567 48 16796
     
  9. Fifth house at /warp conkham3
    Coords: -7428 55 15036
     
  10. Sixth at /warp bandavassal1
    coords: -8483 44 20310
     
  11. Seventh, Butcher at /warp harteham2
    Coords: 4508 49 10599
     
  12. Eighth House at /warp harteham1
    Coords: 4654 47 10444
     
  13. 9th Home at /warp newkeep
    Coords: 2945 48 1016
     
  14. 10th house at /warp brandybottom
    Coords: -7155 41 15285
     
  15. Sth house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    -crates are full of veggies despite the untouched crops around
    -having a fine white linen in the mud is something few would do
    -leather/stuffed seats are prone to getting ruined by water, and it can rain outside
    -try not to have overcrowded yards
    - try not to overuse storage blocks 6 for most low class houses is enough

    otherwise well done

    ConkHam house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    -Fire hazard
    -do not mix too many different beds

    otherwise well done
     
  16. Bandavassal1 house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    - seems like enah adressed all the issues with you, I have nothing else to say
    well done
    Harteham2 house - there are some problems regarding the profession/etc.. of the house - the project leader should solve those first

    Harteham1 house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    -all good found no errors
    good job

    Newkeep house- here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    -firehazard
    -few int details
    otherwise good job

    Brandybottom house - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    - add some patches of grass around the corners of the yard and in areas that are not likely to get trampled
    - few exts/ints issues
    good job
     
  17. 11th House: /warp Keath
    Coords: -1208 39 4068
     
  18. 12th House: /warp Keath
    Coords: -1222 39 4062
     
  19. Keath houses (11,12) - here are the highlights (we went through the house in game)
    - try to have blocks that are meant to hang from a rope on a rope
    -do not have windows directly on the ground level
    - few minor int/ext issues

    otherwise well done
     
  20. 13th house: /warp wullvillage2
    Coords: -777 128 -13161