Probation: Hannojo

Discussion in 'Probation' started by Hannojo, Jun 11, 2018.

  1. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    Greetings!
    I look forward to beginning my probation process.
     
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  2. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    1st House:
    (Wealthy farmer with a small cattle pasture, vegetable garden, outhouse etc. attached).
    1.) /warp Keath
    2.) -977.550, 39, 4039.488
     
  3. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    2nd House:
    (Poor fisherman with a vegetable garden, clothes & fish drying rack etc.).
    1.) /warp glham1
    2.) -6850.700, 42, -6625.488
     
  4. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    3rd House:
    (Poor Farmer with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, outhouse, and chicken coup.)
    1.) /warp Broom
    2.) -4746.488, 37, 14940.451
     
  5. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    4th House:
    (Farmer family of 3 with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, fire-wood storage etc).
    1.) /warp RedLake
    2.) -5482.488, 56, 15790.314
     
  6. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    5th House:
    (Middle-class tailor & Clothier family of 6).
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6291.587, 38, 18974.488
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2018
  7. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    6th House:
    (Low-class anti-social fieldhand with vegetable gardens, clothes drying rack, and wood storage).
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6284.300, 40, 18964.454
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2018
  8. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    7th House:
    (Low-class fieldhand with clothes drying rack and firewood storage).
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6284.468, 36, 19043.306
     
  9. otty

    otty Builder

    Hey Sorry Hannojo Ill take up your probation, I thought my message had sent previously
     
  10. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    No worries! It's quite alright. Thank you for taking me under your wing!
     
  11. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    8th House:
    (Low-class recently moved in fieldhand family of 3 with clothes drying rack, firewood storage, outhouse, and strawberry garden).
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6240.488, 36, 19036.514
     
  12. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    9th House:
    (Middle-class candlemaker & lampright family of 6 with clothes drying rack and firewood storage).
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6308.488, 37, 18975.533
     
  13. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    10th House:
    (Low-class farmer with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, and outhouse).
    1.) /warp Broom
    2.) -4752.488, 37, 14922.592
     
  14. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    11th house:
    (Low-class farmer with vegetable and flower garden, clothes drying rack, outhouse, firewood storage, and wagon).
    1.) /warp Broom
    2.) -4759.477, 37, 14923.512
     
  15. otty

    otty Builder

    Hello Hannojo I got many houses Check I got most of the Broom ones in that little hamlet complete and I got the Keath, GLham1, and Redlake checked.
    I meloned all those homes so you can visit them and check out more of my feedback

    Tendencies I noticed
    -Lots of food and rich items for poor families. IE Tools. These people were poor and often had alot a makeshift use stuff. Such as crates for tables etc.
    -Tight interiors You don't need to fill the interiors to the brim with stuff, poor people couldn't afford much to stock their home with
    -Outdoor seating is supposed to be a no-no for lower class peasants. They would use the majority of their space for crops.

    You did well on following the style guides, gradients, and daub patterns but I'd like to push thinking logically about the lifestyles of people back then. Poor people had very little, so provide them such!
     
  16. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    Hello Otty,

    Thank you for taking the time to critique my builds. I have realized how frugal the poorer houses should be. I've fixed all the mistakes you've identified at the builds you have critiqued. I will take the knowledge I've gathered from this to improve my builds in the future.

    Thanks,
    ~Hannojo.
     
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  17. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    12th House:
    (Low-class cobbler family of 4 with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, and firewood storage.)
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6284.402, 41, 18946.532
     
  18. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    13th House:
    (Low-class shady fisherman family of 3 with fish drying rack and storage shed.)
    1.) /warp Ball
    2.) -6352.374, 36, 18928.300
     
  19. Hannojo

    Hannojo Builder

    14th House:
    (Low-class fieldhand family of 3 with firewood storage, vegetable gardens, outhouse, and clothes drying rack).
    1.) /warp redlakevillage
    2.) -5502.512, 56, 15796.485