Probation: DylanLovesYouJP

Discussion in 'Probation' started by DylanLovesYouJP, Aug 8, 2018.

  1. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Hey! Here's my probation thread! :)
     
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  2. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    First probation build:

    /warp Hutcheson
    X/Y/Z: -5402 / 70 / 20221
    2 person house, farmers
     
  3. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Second probation build:

    /warp conkham3
    X/Y/Z: -7431 / 55 / 15035
    4 person, 1 dog house, farmers
     
  4. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Third probation build:

    /warp ball
    X/Y/Z: -6277 / 41 / 18933
    4 person house, fieldhands.
     
  5. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Fourth probation build:

    /warp uffering
    X/Y/Z: -6670 / 45 / 17711
    1 person house, septon.
     
  6. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Fifth probation build:

    /warp fvkeath
    X/Y/Z: -1359 / 42 / 3342
    5 person house, farmers.
     
  7. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Sixth probation build:

    /warp wullvillage1
    X/Y/Z: -2109 / 43 / -12766
    1 person house, furrier.
     
  8. Hey Dylan, I'll be your probie leader :) You seem to have already gotten the hang of everything, but feel free to ask if you have any questions. I'll give some feedback on your houses soon (in-game if I catch you online, otherwise in this thread). Enjoy building!

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  9. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Awesome! I’m looking forward to it! :)
     
  10. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Seventh probation build:

    /warp wullvillage1
    X/Y/Z: -2116 / 43 / -12767
    2 person house, furriers.
     
  11. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Eighth probation build:

    /warp broom
    X/Y/Z: -4772 / 38 / 14906
    2 person house, farmers.
     
  12. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Ninth probation build:

    /warp broom
    X/Y/Z: -4782 / 39 / 14900
    3 person house, farmers.
     
  13. Checked out the first five, they look great overall! Don't really have any feedback or tips except for super minor stuff:

    House 2:
    - I'm not sure the gradient needs four blocks for a small house (though I know the house next door has it). I would suggest focusing on using 3 blocks but making a smooth evenly-spaced gradient.
    - When you make houses, feel free to add some of the detailing around the house, most importantly foliage (which will make the exterior seem less plain if done right) and putting tall grass around, but also stuff like clotheslines, wheelbarrows, etc. Unless it infringes on other plots or the build leader has said not to.

    House 3:
    - Vines are a lil patchy, try to use them in slightly larger and "continuous" strands going up the house. Also, make sure the vines connect to ground, since they grow using nutrients from the dirt. I changed one of the patches on the house and left a note block over it to show how I would have done it.

    The other houses look great! I'll take a look at some of the others later.

    *Whispers* Build at White Harbor next :D
     
  14. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    That's awesome! Thank you so much for the feedback, I'll make those changes shortly :)

    Is there anywhere specific in White Harbor I should build? I'd love to take on one of those houses :)
     
  15. There's a tanner area with plots just north of the Wolf's Den, make sure to research whatever the purpose of the plot is first. There are also some assorted small houses and sheds in the rest of WHSprawl.
     
  16. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    No problem! I’ll make a start on it tomorrow :)

    Thank you
     
  17. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Tenth probation build:

    /warp broom
    X/Y/Z: -4852 / 35 / 14656
    2 person house, fishers.
     
  18. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Eleventh probation build:

    /warp broom
    X/Y/Z: -4852 / 35 / 14657
    2 person house, netmaker.
     
  19. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Twelfth probation build:

    /warp broom
    X/Y/Z: -4851 / 34 / 14644
    1 person house, fisher.
     
  20. DylanLovesYouJP

    DylanLovesYouJP Builder

    Thirteenth probation build:

    /warp wullvillage1
    X/Y/Z: -2064 / 43 / -12811
    Two person house, apothecary.